The Chockboard

This is based on one of my favorite dreams. It frustrates me, 'cause it's a fine drawing, BUT ITS NOT WHAT I IMAGINED! I feel like the creature in the land of my imagination deserves more, know what I mean? I just cant see the graceful and awe inspiring thing that I tried to convey. The head is all wrong and I feel like it is too petite and pretty, and the action just isn't coming across.